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    stories is liyae nahin ati kiun k writer ko na toh response milta hai or na he muawza upar se taneed alag is liyae kaafi saari kahaniyan adhoori rehg ayee hain, kis k paas itna faaltu time hai kay bey matlab readers kay liyae likhne beth jaaye
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    Quote Originally Posted by faiza001 View Post
    New stories ku nahi likhi ja rhi
    Kiya is forum Ki bus ho chuki hai ya koi likhna hi nahi chahata
    Janab Stories na aanay ki wajha yah hai kay jab koi writer story likhta hai toh readers ka response uska muavza hota hai pr readers response he nahin detay ulta tanqeed alag ab bhala kon time waste kr k aise readers k liyae story likhay,yah he wajha hai kay kaafi saari kahaniyaan adhori reh gayee hain,@Story_Maker ne kai baar logon se kaha hai kay wo incomplete stories ko complete karain pr koi kaam nahin krna chahta sab muft main mazay lena chahtay hain.
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    Dear Story Maker,

    Mera experience bilkul b acha nahi raha. Man b 70% story likh k he posting start krta hoon. Mujhay aik story men late update ban b kia ja chukka hay. Man nay 2 stories likhi lakin post nahi ki. Ab buht arsay bad aik story post ki hay.

    Anyhow ap ki bhi efforts han is forum ko chalanay k leay. Ap ki ray ka ihtram krta hoon. Agar writers ko incourge kren to unhen koe incentives den to shaid yeh forum pehlay jesa attractive ho jay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hot dani View Post
    Dear Story Maker,

    Mera experience bilkul b acha nahi raha. Man b 70% story likh k he posting start krta hoon. Mujhay aik story men late update ban b kia ja chukka hay. Man nay 2 stories likhi lakin post nahi ki. Ab buht arsay bad aik story post ki hay.

    Anyhow ap ki bhi efforts han is forum ko chalanay k leay. Ap ki ray ka ihtram krta hoon. Agar writers ko incourge kren to unhen koe incentives den to shaid yeh forum pehlay jesa attractive ho jay.
    mera experience bohat bura raha hai.
    mein sab se pheley bachpan mein, school k magazine k liye likhna shuru kiya, phir ahista ahista weekly magazines k liye, phir monthly magazines k liye

    bohat acha response mila, lekin un stories ko mein ne adult stories se alag rakha kabhi us duniya ko is duniya mein zahir nahi kiya.

    adult stories ko complete karne ka socha, bola b, yahi meri mistake thi, mujh par bohat ziyada tanqeed ki gai, kuch dost baney thy unhoon ne mujhy sex addict k khtaab se nawaza, phir incest lover, phir *** poster, phir gaaliyaan dene lagey,

    phir pheli kahani 1 saal pheley likhi, badla, phir aab dosri shuru ki hai incest hai.

    umeed hai k complete kar loon ga

    uf ko aap sab new writers hi number 1 par wapis laa saktey ho, jaisa k aaj kal uf par koi b urdu inpage story nahi chal rahi, isi liye sab ko bar bar bola ja raha hai, k aap roman story ko urdu mein likh kar khud post karien ta k roman ko convert karne se shayad aap sab ko likhney ka shouq paida ho...


    mein writer ko kuch income dene ka admin ko barha bar bola hai, lekin admin ne bataya k aaj din tak new writers ki taraf se kuch maze ka parhney ko nahi mila jis par mawza diya jaye.

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    Quote Originally Posted by baani009 View Post
    aaj kay waqt main sab log masroof hain hr kisi kay paaas itna waqt nahin kay stories likhta rahe jo likhta hai usay acha response nahin milta ya tanqeed ki jaati jis se mostly stories adhori reh jaati hain.
    baani sir g

    agree with your statement

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