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    Great update..........

    Need more............




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    Dil bagh bagh ho gaya par ky great update
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    Quote Originally Posted by obablee View Post
    میں نے چند دن پہلے فوٹو کہانی والے سیکشن میں مندرجہ ذیل اپنی شاندار کہانی شائع کی ہے پر ابھی تک اس پر کوئی خاص فیڈ بیک وصول نہیں ہوا۔ میرا خیال ہے کہ شاید اس سکیشن کو زیادہ لوگ چیک نہیں کرتے۔ برائے مہربانی میری اس تصویری کہانی ایک بار ضرور پڑھیں اور اپنا قیمتی ردعمل اور آرا بھی ضرور پیش کریں۔ کہانی کا لنک یہ ہے
    http://megaurdu.com/picture-stories/...85-1672-a.html
    Main ne psrhi thi r comment b kia tha kio r b complete story b share kero na r ho saky to s ko h continue kro

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    Is story ki tareef na kerna ap k sath nahe story k sath zayadti ho gi phir jis tarha ap likh rahy ho wo to ksmal hain bohat he aalla likh raha hain ager ise tarha ap likhne lagy to phir hum loog shah g jesay writer's ko bhoolne lagayn gaye jo k wasy b ek bhooli basri yaadoon ki tarha ghaib ho gaye hain.


    Baqi yaqeen nahe ata k bhen bhaiyon main isa b ho sakta ha insist to hota ho shayad but is tarha ................. yaqeeen nahe aata r y parh k afsoos hota hai but y zindagi hai is dunia main pata nahe kia kia r kis tarha ho raha ha

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    Thumbs up Khayaloon Ki Dunya...(i n c e s t by Cupid Arrow)

    اعلی جناب۔ بہت عمدہ لیکن ایک مشورہ ہے کہ لکھنے کے بعد ایک سے دو بار خود پڑھ لیں تاکہ جہاں کہیں کوئی کمی ہو اسے پورا کر سکیں۔

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    Boht he zabrdast or kamal ki update di ha.... Maza aa gaya

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    update ka intezar hy

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    Update
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    Kub ay GI is wonder ful story ki

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    Bohat hi umda story hai....
    Good work... Keep it up bro...

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    Yar bhai ap update q ni dy rahe ho

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