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    [QUOTE=holiday;565549]
    دوستوں سب سے پہلے تو معوزرت کے پچھلے کہانی پوپوری نہیں کر سکا کیوں کے زندگی میں اُلجھ گیا تھا ایک بار ایک کہانی اُدھوری چھوڑ دوں تو دوبارہ لکھنے کا مزا نہیں آتا تو اس لیے میں پوری نہیں کر سکوں گااگر کسی اور دوست کو پوری کرنا ہے تو میری طرف سے اجازت ہے۔ ایک بار پھر بہت بہت معزارت

    اب ایک نئی کہانی ڈال رہا ہوں اور اس ڈر سے کے کہیں یہ بھی آدوھوری نہ رہے جائے پوری لکھ کر تب ہی ڈال رہا ہوں لیکن دلچسپی کے پیش نظر قسطوں میں پوسٹ کر دوں گا تو یہ کہانی پوری میرے پاس تیار ہے اس لیے آپ پریشان نہ ہونا۔

    Acha dosto aik bhot zarori baat ye khani alag kisam ki hai jin ko asai kahniya jis me aik Pakistani lardki kisi hindu k sath talaq banaye achi nahi lagti pls na read kerna .............

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    Holiday Saab,

    Aik MAMULI writer ki hasiyat say yeh baat main bohat achi tara janta hoon. Kay saab logoon ki tara aik writer ki NET say bahir bi aik duniya hai. Jis kay jamailay niptana story likhnay say zeyda AHAM kaam hai. Aur mainn yeh baat bi bohat achi tara janta hoon kay story kay liy time niklna bohat hi mushkil kaam hai.

    Magar in saab batoon kay bawjood yeh kehnay ki JASARAT karoon ga. Kay apni likhi huwi story ko yoon ADHURA choor dena aap jesay MAHAN writer ko hergiz ZAIB nahi deta.

    Is liy aap say MODBANA GUZARISH hai kay apnay QAMATI wakat main say time nikal kar apni is story aur apni dusri story "UNCUT KI DEWANI" ko update zaror karain please.

    SHUKRIYA...
    Mohabat Mujay Un Jawano Say Hai
    Apni Behan Kay Naray Pay Jo Dalaty Hain HATH.

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    Agreed, writer ki grip & stly bohat acha hay.
    Is stoty ko pora kiya jana chahiy. bohat interesting mode par chor di hay

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    pajal bhai..aap aik mamooli nahi aik great writer ho
    apki bat sa agree krta hoon or holiday bhai sa requst kurta hoon kih is story ko or doosri incomplete story 'zindagi ke safar or hu insan" ko zaroor complete karen..
    plzzz

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    I think k writer is story ko b incomplete h chor day ga

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    mere paas yeh story show nahin ho rahi

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    Had h ho gae writer g ab to wapas a jao

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    رائٹر صاحب نے یہ کہانی چھوڑ دی ہے۔۔



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    ہالیڈے بھائی یار آپ سے ایک بار پھر گزارش ہے کے اپنی مصروفیات سے ٹائم نکال کر اس کہانی کو مکمل کر دیں جناب شکریہ
    Mohabat Mujay Un Jawano Say Hai
    Apni Behan Kay Naray Pay Jo Dalaty Hain HATH.

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    Dear Holiday,

    Please complete this story or at-least say something about this thread.

    Its a humble request.

    Thanks.
    Smile is the cheapest remedy for every disease.

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