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    Quote Originally Posted by Khushi25 View Post
    OMG......OMG
    You inspired on my writing
    I can't believe this
    I am writing just as
    I am not a professional
    Just read some writers on UF and decide to write something
    But you are very good dear
    Even though mr Faisal and admin praises you .....on my story no one like comments
    This mean you are going just amazing and I really like your thought and the way you express shiza feeling
    Urdu writing or say writing is never my field
    You can say that I am an accidental writer
    And I introduced you from mr Asim
    Can't understand
    Any way love you dear
    You are very good as compare me
    Keep up dating and happy writing
    That is absolutely true khushi ....i meant i never wrote anything in urdu before ....Asim sir encouraged me and asked me to read your stories thats how i ended up writing my own ....he is truly a genius ..knows very well how to motivate newbies like me you are much better ....and wish you all the best ...hope will read some thing fantastic from you soon

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    سچ میں کہانی پڑھنے کا مزہ ہی تب آتا ہے جب ٹائم پہ اپڈیٹ آتی رے ، اور جناب ہنی مون ہے نواز صاحب کے علاوہ بھی بہت لوگ ہیں ، اگرنواز صاحب کے ساتھ ہی رہناہے تو گھر ہی کافی تھا ہنی مون کی پھر کیا ضرورت تھی ، اب کسی اور کو بھی موقع دیں ،اور عمدہ لاجواب سٹوری ہے ۔۔۔

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    Janab bot zabardast shandar alla
    Thandy thandy mosam ma garma garm update maza a gya g
    next ka intazar ray ga thanks g

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    The Breakfast Scene Was Amazing If I Am Not Wrong Sex With Butter Was First Introduced In Marlon Brando's The Last Tango In Paris And Since Then It's Very Popular In Soft Core European Movies, You Created That Scene Amazingly. We Had Another Female Writer Here In Urdufunda Fiz Kamran Who's Style Was Same As Yours She Also Used To Write Every Small Details Of The Surroundings Just Like You Do. This Time The Update Was Short But Was Super HOT. Thanks For Your Valuable Time
    If U Stand For A Reason,Be Prepared To Stand Alone Like A Tree.
    If U Fall On The Ground,Fall As A Seed That Grows Back To Fight Again.

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    nice and hot story

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    Quote Originally Posted by 85sexy85 View Post
    The Breakfast Scene Was Amazing If I Am Not Wrong Sex With Butter Was First Introduced In Marlon Brando's The Last Tango In Paris And Since Then It's Very Popular In Soft Core European Movies, You Created That Scene Amazingly. We Had Another Female Writer Here In Urdufunda Fiz Kamran Who's Style Was Same As Yours She Also Used To Write Every Small Details Of The Surroundings Just Like You Do. This Time The Update Was Short But Was Super HOT. Thanks For Your Valuable Time

    thank you very much dear ... your encouraging comments always help me to write in a much better way.....not sure about marlon brando but morning (breakfast) ,lunch & dinner sex are new emerging innovations in western society ...sex with meal or meal with sex its truly very HOT HOT HOT
    Last edited by Aashi92; 11-01-2017 at 01:15 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Khushi25 View Post
    Thanks dear
    Oh please don't do wish like this
    If he listen he start working on it
    No no no
    I take my liking back
    I am ok with out this break fast
    You enjoy with your hubby( like if you r married)
    😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
    LOL why so afraid ?? its such an amazing fun dear try one time i am sure you would love that ... yup i do enjoy a lot ... thats my hubby's favorite thing LOL

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    Wow so mrs nawaz also know the secret
    Shiza enjoy two way fucking
    One side mr and other side mrs
    A good one part
    Keep up dating dear
    Take care

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    Ayisha g boht pyari awr garma garm update dihy. Start sy ab tk ka sb sy hot piece thq

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