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    [QUOTE=ShaziAlee;565805]
    Quote Originally Posted by hardwood;Dear Readers

    With EPISODE 22, I will take leave from UF for a week. I will come back with episode 23 NEXT year. I have some professional engagements. I will not be able to write. I will try to write and post as soon as possible for my readers.

    Thanks for reading and your support.

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    LEAVE GRANTED HARDWOOD G. kia yaad kere gai aap bhi. hahaha. I'll miss you baby. please try to remain in touch on VM. I hope I'll also be free by that time. Love you sweetie!![/B]
    Dear Shazi
    How can I forget to comment oN VM. You know you are my love and my time halts without you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lastzaib View Post
    Take your time dear.
    Thanks for understanding friend.

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    Quote Originally Posted by suhail502 View Post
    روکنگ اپڈیٹ۔ کمال کا سین تحریر کیا ہے۔ کیپ اٹ آپ۔۔
    Thanks for encouragement and dropping a comment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by farhan403 View Post
    Itne zaberdast update dayne py ap ki choti ki darkhowast mazoor ker de h ap ki is do atisha ne aag laga de ha ek moterbike py riding sex oper tasaveeri jhalkiyaan kia he baat h maa dobala ho gaya ha pehly h 3maah r 9dino say bivi say door hon ab to bardasht b jawab dayne lagi ha itne mast update parh r dakh ker....
    Kia he maza r kia h sama hota ager New year night py ek dhamaka daar update a jati.......
    Ap ki choti manzooor to ho gae ha but ab wapas b zaroor ana.....
    Thanks for your comment friend. Sorry apki new year py update wali wish poori nai kar paoonga.

    Umeed ha ap writer kimajboori samjhgay ho gy

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    Dear friends

    Ap sab log Khan Chacha or Aamir ko milny wali saza guess/suggest karain. Jiski saza sab sy best hogi wo story ka part bana di jaygi.

    Jo saza writer ny soch rakhi ha wo to apko pata chal he jaygi.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hardwood View Post
    Dear friends

    Ap sab log Khan Chacha or Aamir ko milny wali saza guess/suggest karain. Jiski saza sab sy best hogi wo story ka part bana di jaygi.

    Jo saza writer ny soch rakhi ha wo to apko pata chal he jaygi.
    i think they would be operated and transformed into transgender and are now slave in dubai.

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    Quote Originally Posted by angelseyes20 View Post
    i think they would be operated and transformed into transgender and are now slave in dubai.
    hummm. Nice. Very nice. Lets see k kya hota ha unk sath.

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    [QUOTE=hardwood;565965]
    Quote Originally Posted by ShaziAlee View Post

    Shazi G!
    First of all thanks for granting the permission. *WINKS*.

    Secondly I never mentioned the name of country and I request all not to use the name of country.

    Thirdly, I can sense you found it weired. You did not even like the episode. *GANDI* hain ap. You are well aware of the fact that I look for you everywhere. I do not know if I should *LOVE* you or *HATE* you for this, but i know that I worship you.

    Lastly who cares? Don't you know who cares about whom? Should I elaborate?

    Love you.

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    My dear Hardwood G!!

    Our feelings for each others are mutual. I can feel whatever you have in your heart for me similarly, I hope you would also feel the pulse of my heart.

    Secondly, I didn't say in my comments that you mentioned the name of the country however baby, Here are few lines from you update that may reply to your reservations. Here are those two lines taken from your update...

    نیلا لندن میں آتے ہی ڈیوڈ کو اپنی پھدی دینے کے لیے تیار ہو گئی تھی۔ اس نے ڈیوڈ کو گرین سگنل دینا شروع کر دیے تھے۔ انیلا کا ہاتھ کبھی کبھی ڈیوڈ کی پینٹ کے اوپر سے اسکے لن سے ٹکرا رہا تھا۔ ڈیوڈ انیلا کے اشارے سمجھ رہا تھا۔ لیکن جو کچھ اس نے انیلا کے ملک کے کلچر کے بارے میں پڑھا

    تھا اسے سوچ کر وہ تھوڑا سا محتاط تھا۔ وہ انیلا ک
    ساتھ اس رائیڈنگ کے کھیل کو آگے بڑھانے کا سوچ رہا تھا۔

    Who cares? I meant that as long as your readers are happy with the story then everything is fine. I admitted that you have a better hand on the pulse of your readers.

    Do you really doubt on my intentions? *smiles*


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    [QUOTE=hardwood;565785][CENTER][COLOR="#0000CD"][B][SIZE=6]
    قسط نمبر 22
    آئی لو رائیڈنگ[
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    خان چاچا اور عامر کو کیا سزا ملی؟ کیا جنید کبھی دوبارہ شازی سے مل پائے گا؟
    انیلا اور علینہ کا ٹکرائو کب اور کہاں ہو گا؟ ڈیوڈ اور انیلا کا افیئر کب تک چلے گا؟
    نیلی آنکھوں والی لڑکی کون تھی؟
    ان سب سوالوں کا جواب پڑھنے کے لیے کہانی پڑھتے رہیے۔

    Hardwood G

    One thing I forgot to answer about this update, This looked weird to me because a Pakistani girl feeling shy to shake hands with a stranger and tells him


    ڈیوڈ نے انیلا سے ہاتھ ملانے کے لیے اپنا ہاتھ آگے بڑھا دیا۔ انیلا حیرانگی سے اسے دیکھ رہی تھی۔

    انیلا: سوری لیکن میں جس ملک سے ہوں ادھر لڑکوں سے ہاتھ نہیں ملاتے۔

    Then suddenly she gets so excited that she decides to go for a ride on bike and let that stranger fu*k her during the ride and that too on the streets????

    AT this point, I mentioned


    But who cares as long as the readers acknowledge the plot and I had already admitted that you have a better hand on the pulse of your readers.

    We are lovebirds Hardwood G and very sincere friends also. Friends don't feel shy to share their thoughts. right? I never meant to be a critic but I also wanted to share how I felt about this update.

    Baby!! I am really sorry if you found my comments discouraging OR meaningless. I'll try not to repeat this type of thought sharing on your updates.

    Love you sweetie

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    Shazi G Posted (Baby!! I am really sorry if you found my comments discouraging OR meaningless. I'll try not to repeat this type of thought sharing on your updates.)

    Your comments and *DISCOURAGING*? I always look for your comments. You should not try to *NOT* repeat this type of thought sharing. I love your comments. I *JUST* said that you did not *LIKE* and *PRESS THANKS* on my update. *FEELING SAD*.

    You know I love you with your comments.

    Hardwood

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