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    پیش خدمت ہے ایک نئی کہانی۔۔مگر دوستو اپ ڈیٹ کے لئے بار بار ضد مت کرنا۔۔سہولت کے ساتھ اس کا اپڈیٹ کرتا رہوں گا


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    کیا بات ہے جناب
    یہ نام تو قراۃ العین کی شہرہء آفاق ناول کا ہے
    آگ کا دریا

    اور میرے خیال میں تو لکھاری کو سہولت کے ساتھ ہی اپڈیٹ کرنی چاہیے
    اپنا ٹائم لو پرنس اور معیاری اپڈیٹ دو

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    kahani to post ki nahee kahani kaha hy

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    انتظار اتنا ہو کہ کہانی کا تسلسل نہ ٹوٹے زیادہ انتظار سے آگے دوڑ پیچھے چوڑ والا معاملہ ہو جاتا ہے یعنی جب تک نئی اپڈیٹ آتی ہے پچھلی ساری کہانی بھول جاتی ہے
    شکریہ بہت ایک نئے سلسلے کا

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    Part 1










    saturday,12 March 2016

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    Default Well Done

    for a nice story in very unique style. Please keep it up.

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    بہت عمدہ پرنس
    بہت اچھے انداز سے کہانی کا آغاز کیا ہے
    یہ آغاز ہی بتا رہا ہے کہ ایک معیاری کہانی پڑھنے کو ملے گی
    آپ کی اگلی اپڈیٹ کا انتظار رہے گا

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    بہت اعلی پرنس جی!!! ا

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    Wow new story
    Start good poor Gazala
    Look interesting
    Let's see what's come next
    Take your time prince

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    بہت شاندار شروعات. انجام تک پہنچتے پہنچتے غزالہ پر کیا بیتے گی بے صبری سے انتظار ہے

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